💬 Teacher Comment
✅ You handle complex sentence structures well and can discuss abstract topics (e.g., economic pressure, systemic challenges) with good control of grammar overall.
🎯 Improve: A few passive and verb form issues came up: ❌ “I'm the last one that will be cancelled.” ✅ “I’m the last one to be cancelled.” (Use the infinitive structure after “the last one”.) ❌ “It’s getting fi...
✅ Your ideas are clear and well-developed. You rarely hesitate, and your meaning is almost always understandable.
🎯 Improve: Occasionally, grammatical slips occured but did not weaken the impact of your message. At Advanced level, clarity often depends on precision. Small adjustments in verb forms and passive constructions ...
✅ You speak with assurance and are very comfortable defending your position. You don’t avoid complex topics and you engage actively in discussion.
🎯 Improve: Continue pushing yourself to experiment with higher-level vocabulary and rhetorical phrasing — you’re ready for that next step.
✅ You express ideas in a structured, logical way. You naturally build arguments and support them with reasoning. Your tone is analytical and appropriate for professional discussions.
🎯 Improve: We can work on making your arguments even sharper by: Using clearer signposting (e.g., “The key issue here is…”, “What’s often overlooked is…”) Slightly reducing sentence length when clarity could i...
✅ You show strong range when discussing systems, economics, and structural challenges. You’re clearly capable of operating at a high conceptual level.
🎯 Improve: We can expand: More advanced linking devices More varied passive constructions More idiomatic expressions for argumentation For example: “This raises the question of…” “What tends to happen in t...